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Sunday, 5 May 2019
The Change of Seasons!!
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Hello my name is Abigail and I go to Parkview Parua.
ReplyDeleteI loved this because autumn is my favorite season and the trees are beautiful.
You taught me what you do in summer, winter and autumn so I got to learn more about you.
Next time, you could explain more about the seasons because that could add more information.
What's your least favorite season?
hi my name is monica that looks veyr cool
ReplyDeleteHi I love how you used lots of describing words in your writing and it makes me think a lot about autumn maybe next time use capital letters at the start of a sentence.
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